I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Wednesday, 6 March 2013

Slendermans Haunted Forest

A long long time ago near the 1800's the widespread rumor of Slenderman, the scary man that haunts the forest, has reached the entrire world.

Since the rumor came out everyone has been on the look out for the mysterious Slenderman. Three kid Josh,  Nick and Jono heard about the rumor and figured  that their might be a reward for capturing the mysterious man.

Josh, Nick and Jono camped out at the woods and then when it hit midnight, they heard something so they checked it out. Bringing a net and some flashlights . they heard the noise again, they threw the net and caught something but it was just the four girls from their class, Giorgione, Sally-Ann, Helen and Teah.

After a few minutes, the girls were just explaining that they were camping out in the woods for their annual camp week but they got lost from their group so they just set their tent here for the first few nights. Giorgione said " can we go now"  to the boys Nick said "are you sure you dont want to stay?" to the girls.

After a few minutes, the girls made a decission to stay and move their tent for a few days. At night they agreed to be in groups when they go to the toilet because it was to dangerous.

Spooky forest in the morning

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jullian
    Thanks for your writing sample. I like how you have structured your story and have clear paragraphs. You started off with a hiss and a roar but didn't finish your story strongly.

    Stephanie

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